unattended
a train of thought
revisits the past
halting at all the Happy stations
lingering
as though visiting by appointment
feeding off distant memories
fading smiles
ah, but the times have changed now
it’s a different track
a collision course
on a cul-de-sac
15 Comments:
Keep them happy. Collisions can be avoided, cul de sacs broken.
more imp'ly collisions can be enjoyed - after a fashion - and survived. wish me luck - 2 of u - big day 2mrw :)
Why, oh why do I find a similar "train" of thought here? :)
Come by sometime :)
beautifully written.
:)
changing tracks?
sad-happy-happy-sad-sad-happy-sad-sad
inkblot: ...and pigs can fly :-)
prerona: enjoyed? how? Hope your day turned out well
the-think: Well, as you now know, I was there :-)
archster: Thanks :-)
j: It's not up to the train to decide which track to run on. There's someone else, sitting far away, pushing some buttons, right? :-)
hmmm wish somehow you could save the collision. collisions are ugly. and they hurt.
pigs can fly? the sure do on pink floyds album!
good set of words here. solid with no trace of sentimentallity. good stuff.
If I were your train driver, I'd make your train stop at the Happy stations.
Very beautiful poem, and very delicate. Hope you are alright?
m (tread softly upon): That's a part of the problem, isn't it? Collisions are rarely voluntary.
cocaine jesus: I ain't Pink Floyd and, unfortunately, my pigs don't fly :-) But, thanks.
evenstar: What a wonderful thing to say! Thanks :-)
Nice lines...
hi, on your blog for the first time and cudnt help readin all ur earlier posts...kinda made me wanna leave a comment here, something that i dont usually do :) (now i know that aint good but its ok :))...u write very well and i really wish ur films n ur career take off in the direction u want em to, and i hope that happens sooon...n.... wenever u feel low, just concentrate on urself, do somethin to pamper urself, like actually DO somthein. let the moment passs and u dont feel as bad. Initailly, it mite be like u always want to do it, but slowly (i so hope it will) it fades off. I dont know how dis sounds to u but giv it a try , go get a massage , DO something..hope it does u goood..tk cr
intern: Thanks! :-)
nomadic waves: Thanks!
deepahnika: Very kind of you to stop by and leave such a thoughtful comment. Appreciate it. And, that's one hell of a story you have on your blog! :-)
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